On October 18 we had our eighth session of discussing “Notes on the Inscriptions on Sacred Scrolls” (Songō shinzō meimon) from the bottom section of CWS 504 to 505 where Shinran explains the Shandao quote.
Before we got into the material, I said that at the luncheon for the Berkeley Higashi temple’s 100th anniversary, I talked with a Nishi Honganji minister and told him about our study group, saying we spend a lot of time critiquing the CWS translation. He was rather appalled that we would challenge the official translation when none of us who regularly attend are native speakers of Japanese. “Your interpretation is just what you think,” he said, implying that only the official translators are knowledgeable enough to convey what Shinran is saying.
But I have to say I would never have been interested in Jodo Shinshu based on the translations put out by Nishi Honganji. Hearing Shinran’s teachings through Rev. Saito and Dr. Haneda brought out meanings that reverberated deeply with me, and then when I studied at Otani University, I had teachers and fellow students to help me read the texts in Japanese and classical Chinese and hear insights that I wouldn’t have received from the Nishi translations alone. I believe we each have to trust our hearts in considering which English translations capture what we hear Shinran saying directly to us.
In this section where Shinran explains the short quote of Shandao’s, there is lot there which we had to help each other unpack, since the English translation was misleading.
Here we are reminded as Dr. Haneda and other teachers say, “Namu” is a command from Life itself saying, “Come to the truth!” It’s not “I take refuge” as is commonly translated, as a statement of one’s agency, one’s own decision to put their faith in Amida. Kimyō is Life (-myō) saying “return (ki-) to me!”
We discussed the metaphorical meaning of “birth in the Pure Land.” I referenced how Rev. Ron Kobata would quote theologian Howard Thurman in “coming alive” which I used in my translation of the ekō-mon at the Buddhist Catholic Dialogue in Rome in 2015. As Shinran explains at the end of this section, that “birth” is the beginning of our new life liberated from the grinding cogs of our calculating mind.
Here we hear Shinran explaining Namu Amida Butsu as an expression of awakening to truth, to life as it really is, free of our constricting delusions. There is no sense of saying “thank you for reserving a spot for me in the afterlife Good Place.”
[Brandon Shimoda in the October 12 Zoom meeting]
This month I want to highlight poet Brandon Shimoda. I started reading his Substack “Vanishing Clarity” and his posts had me reeling in how he relates Japanese American history to the current genocide in Palestine. Although I heard some leaders in Tsuru For Solidarity want to avoid the issue as “divisive” and some people in the Japanese American Citizens League and other organizations say, “Why should we alienate Jewish people when they helped us with redress?” Shimoda makes the case that we as the descendants of our incarcerated ancestors should feel solidarity with the Palestinians and see Israel as part of the imperialist powers that continue to dehumanize people with non-European heritages. He organized a Zoom meeting to promote the book A Chronicle of Our Land (available from communitiesofmemory.com) and raise funds for people struggling in Palestine. He along with Christian ministers Rev. Michael Yoshii in the Bay Area and Rev. Kenji Kuramitsu in Chicago are great examples of those who are living the life of “coming alive” (ō-jō), connecting to Life and responding to the suffering of others.






